Rough Edit 2

Feedback

Best Thing:

-The editing at the beginning is really good.

-It's a big improvement from the first rough edit, it's a lot better now.

-Well lip synced, shot well- fast pace shots matches the rhythm of the song.

-The quick cuts are really good.

-The narrative and performance work well together. The location is also very good and as is the performance.

-I think the clips of the singer were good, especially in time with the music.

-The narrative was clear and represented the genre well.

Worst Thing:

-Add lights to the chorus scenes.

-The ending seems a bit out of place and I think you should use another location aswell. The female actresses performance is also quite over the top.

-More shots of the female singer for instance add more side shots of her.

-There is too much of the singer dancing and the office people dancing.

-Sometimes the performance is out of sync slightly.

-I think that Tugrul should of been filmed walking into the building.

-There are some shots of the artist that are too long and she is not looking at the camera.

Did it fit the genre?

-Yes.

-I think it fit your genre really well.

-The fast pace scenes made it reflect the genre of EDM really well.

-Yes, very much so because of the pace.

-Yes, the fast pace editing and dance scenes reflect on dance genre.

-I do think the video suits the song due to the fast takes and the close ups

-The genre was represented well.